Adeline Foster

Rookie - 299 Points (Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD)

.Haiku by Adeline


October’s fingers
Slip the golden gowns of trees
To woodland carpet
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Comments about this poem (.Haiku by Adeline by Adeline Foster )

  • Silver Star - 3,398 Points Diane Hine (7/26/2014 2:00:00 AM)

    I love haikus but they're not easy. The first one is one of the best I've ever read. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 478 Points Sana Hernandez (6/28/2014 8:09:00 PM)

    Nice haikus, Adeline. Very nice wording! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,067 Points Lee Mack (12/27/2013 8:32:00 PM)

    great work; I will get time for reading all your attractive poetry
    adding you to my list as friend to remember to read (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,324 Points Patricia Grantham (12/17/2013 12:56:00 PM)

    Trees shedding their leaves and leaving a carpet under the trees.
    Very soothing and mellowed write. Rain falling and sometimes the sun
    takes a peek. Loved this. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,808 Points Bri Edwards (7/12/2013 3:32:00 PM)

    the first one i love, the second one i don't understand (what does into my progress mean? ?) , and the third one i don't care for but at least i might understand what you mean (is a car driving down a highway, passing lots of big trucks which shade the car with each passing?) . thanks for sharing. the first one made up for the others. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,723 Points Heather Wilkins (5/24/2013 4:08:00 PM)

    A nice series of haikus Adeline. Each one carries a message (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Edwin Baldwin (8/31/2012 6:57:00 PM)

    October’s fingers... This one caught my eye the most... you've managed to blend a perfect metaphor into such a few lines... outstanding Haiku (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 116 Points Terry O'leary (8/16/2012 5:11:00 PM)

    Nice set of Haikus... Terry (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 89 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (4/3/2012 1:10:00 PM)

    Maestro..in Haiku tenner ~ niv

    PS Please comment on Bliss regards ~ niv (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points igor Grey Balatsky (2/9/2012 2:22:00 PM)

    Haiku-do of yours is so masterly: vivid, alive, metaphorical. I enjoy it – and follow your 'do'.) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,187 Points Walterrean Salley (8/6/2011 4:18:00 PM)

    Fall changes entire landscapes.
    Rain’s a part of life that we must deal with.
    And “let the truckers have their day.”
    I enjoyed your haiku very much. Good job. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (8/10/2009 8:56:00 AM)

    These pieces are both simply stunning Adeline and so skilfully written. I am in awe! 10 Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Jim Norausky (12/23/2008 3:55:00 PM)

    Beautiful Haiku! I wish I could take your classes. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Toko Harper (8/20/2008 8:08:00 PM)

    Wonderful October. Tim (Report) Reply

  • Rookie S. A. S. (6/22/2008 4:05:00 AM)

    Seductive and skillful... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Estrella Baldemosa (6/20/2008 5:13:00 PM)

    evokes the fleeting beauty of nature responded with distinctive sensitivity of a poet... lovely (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Roland Bastien (6/17/2008 11:27:00 AM)

    I hear echoe there
    Can it be in japanese?
    It is hard to write (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,216 Points Ric S. Bastasa (12/16/2007 3:27:00 PM)

    and when the carpet is laid

    walk
    and let the show begin. (Report) Reply



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