Haiku- Breeze Poem by Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Haiku- Breeze

Rating: 5.0


Thy soft touch instills
Freshness and rapture in me
When thou pass like a maiden.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 30 April 2014

Beautiful and lovingly written!

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Spiritual Seeker 25 July 2011

One of the best...simply wonderful, like i am there! Rated 10++++

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Malaya Roses 12 March 2011

The softness was felt and i almost real. Excellent

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Narayanan Ramakrishnan 11 March 2011

In just 3 lines you have described the feel of a maiden. nice and sweet poem. Marks 10. Narayanan.

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Jenny Gordon 04 March 2011

Very beautiful description of a breeze! I quite like the metaphor...it seems excellent!

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Bahraich, U.P. India
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