Heather Burns


Haiku Autumn Leaves Syllable Count 5-7-5 - Poem by Heather Burns

The leaves of Autumn

lovely gold and brown colors
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Form: haiku


Comments about Haiku Autumn Leaves Syllable Count 5-7-5 by Heather Burns

  • Gold Star - 5,308 Points Patricia Grantham (11/17/2014 10:22:00 AM)

    A short but sweet poem showing
    an Autumn painting. Nice. (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
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  • Silver Star - 3,514 Points Saheb Mohapatra (11/5/2014 6:16:00 AM)

    this is also an outstanding haiku...........colors of autumn painting the earth..........greatly enjoyed it..........thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 184 Points Brian Jani (7/13/2014 2:16:00 AM)

    autumn is a time to remember indeed with it's vivid colours and fresh scents (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 23,446 Points * Sunprincess * (6/24/2014 11:23:00 PM)

    ...............and I can't wait to see those beautiful colours again.....loved this one... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Holly Grace (3/31/2014 6:47:00 PM)

    *The lovely colorful language that you used in this haiku
    paints a beautiful picture in my mind.* Wonderful job! :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Karthika Mukundh (9/24/2013 5:18:00 AM)

    I love this one... Natures palette has it surprises... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,325 Points Shahzia Batool (8/21/2013 12:13:00 AM)

    what a magic this 5-7-5 syllable division is...i am a conformist too, though it's the time of free-for-all kinds of structures...i still find myself strict for the rules...
    the poem is as charming as an autumn painting is! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 23,467 Points Sandra Feldman (8/20/2013 9:51:00 PM)

    Lovely,3 little lines, and yet such a beautifully painted picture.
    Nature, the great Artist painting the landscape (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,220 Points Sallam Yassin (8/20/2013 4:11:00 PM)

    and that is the blanket
    dear nature sowed
    for the earth/ nice haiku (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,295 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (8/20/2013 4:04:00 PM)

    Tempting as autumn is, just a few short weeks away
    Let me relish the last dregs of summer
    Before it all slips away (Report) Reply








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