(haiku And Tankas) .... Rising At Dawn Poem by Janice Windle

(haiku And Tankas) .... Rising At Dawn

Rating: 5.0


Walk in early light
Blue field and cold sickle moon,
Owl fluttering home.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 18 August 2008

the sickle moon and owl …good analogy...moon's recession into light is beautifully painted as 'fluttering home' by the painter poetess...a superb, 'high' ku, Janice...10

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Onelia Avelar 11 August 2008

I like this 'Owl fluttering home' - true beautiful haiku image

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Roger Cornish 11 August 2008

'cold sickle moon' Yummy! Rx

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