Haiku- An Accident (5-7-5) Poem by Valsa George

Haiku- An Accident (5-7-5)

Rating: 4.8


A small train derailed
There was no casualty
Was a millipede

Friday, September 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 25 September 2015

Wonderful write Valsa, , thank you for sharing!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 September 2015

Wonderful presentation with the word millipede. Best Haiku.....10

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Sranisha Francis 25 September 2015

Very beautiful...............

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Loke Kok Yee 25 September 2015

This is a very creative piece.10

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All is well that turns out well. Something as spall as a millipede can cause a huge train to derail. Indeed something big in every little thing.

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Valsa George 30 August 2018

Unfortunately you didn't catch the meaning.....! Here millipede is the train.... it looks like a miniature train in appearance! Thank you Simon!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 May 2018

Wonderful power of creativity! This little poem (Haiku) carries wit tinged with a little fun! Thanks dear madam for sharing..Full marks!

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 March 2017

Derailed! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Rajesh Thankappan 18 October 2015

I think the millipede turned into a wheel and cleared away. A nice one.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 04 October 2015

I wish you had written a limerick on this. Good one. Try a limerick please.

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