Haiku: A Bird Poem by Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary
Haiku: A Bird
A bird is resting
After a long journey, as
Miles are still to cross
Sunday, March 2, 2008
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Michael Pruchnicki
02 March 2008
Jyoti - Good work on a haiku! Perhaps if you changed it here & there - bird rests in a tree miles and miles from its nest many more miles to rest I don't know about you, but that's part of the fun writing a haiku, right?
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4/19/2024 2:02:20 PM # 1.0.0.1119
................very nice write.....little birds need to rest also.....