Haiku Poem by Yasmin Khan

Haiku



life a gig with
lamps of memories
lightening the path

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 12 October 2015

Powerful haiku with philosophical touch.........10

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Farah Ilyas 12 May 2013

Few words have impact of wonder like paradox...yeap memories are the precious treasure for someone if good... thanks To share

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Allemagne Roßmann 25 April 2013

And if they are always meant to be the beacon as you say- - liked the bid here. Haikus are software engg in poetry which tell a lot in very little.Thats why Japs are still Japs.Others just followed.

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Shahzia Batool 10 April 2013

Thematically it's a wonderful and meaningful haiku, but being a v humble learner, staying among the master hands i got to know that in the 3 lines of haiku there should be the structure of syllables like this: Line one: 5 Syllables // Line Two: 7 syllables, and again Line three: 5 syllables..., and the way you write, it's very beautiful...

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Saadat Tahir 03 February 2013

lovely...steeped in wisdom..... life in short liked

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