Haiku,91 Poem by Fabrizio Frosini

Haiku,91

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Full moon –

Up and down on the waves

Boat offshore.


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Haiku,91
Tuesday, August 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
from ''KARUMI - Haiku & Tanka'', ebook published at Amazon

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Translated into English from the original Italian poem (see also the original text)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 06 August 2015

Beautiful. You have done the haiku justice, Sir.

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Glen Kappy 04 August 2017

hey, fabrizio! i like this. so many poems about the moon! i just read a lovely one by laurie van der hart, a new posting of hers. and i read this recently (in translation) from buson Escaped the nets, escaped the ropes- moon on the water. i have one, o moon. glen

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Fabrizio Frosini 12 August 2017

thanks Glen. I'm going to read it

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M Asim Nehal 23 July 2016

SUPERB Haiku...... On full moon night waves are restless because of the centrifugal force which is greater than the Moon's gravitational pull, ocean water bulges outward and even the boat off shore is affected by it...Great imagery and fantastic translation.

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Fabrizio Frosini 25 July 2016

Thank you, dear Asim; it's very kind of you

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Fabrizio Frosini 17 October 2015

about the picture: it is by Hokusai Katsushika - View of Honmoku near Kanagawa (1803) Kanagawa-oki, Honmoku no zu - Veduta di Honmoku vicino a Kanagawa (1803) Kanagawa-oki, Honmoku no zu

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Walterrean Salley 14 September 2015

an exceptional haiku. Thanks.

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Fabrizio Frosini 15 September 2015

it's very kind of you, Salley, coming by and commenting on my poems. Thanks for your words of appreciation. Ciao!

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Roseann Shawiak 30 August 2015

Your words paint a beautiful picture within my mind, reminding me of the times I have seen similar sights. Thank you for the reminder, very touching. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Fabrizio Frosini 30 August 2015

thank you, dear RoseAnn

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