Haiku(2) Poem by Yasmin Khan
Haiku(2)
We long for deep greens
Along the life-giving waters
Thirsty boughs with parched lips
excellent haiku. thess are some of my favorite forms. well done
have you counted the third line? '' thirsty ' has 2 syllables.....but the meaning of the 3rd line is terrific.. love it...excellent! ! 1cracking!
Desiccated boughs want water to flourish but fail to do so, same in our life happens, nothing could lessen our burden, our miseries....multi_interpretable Haiku... digging in it still...fabulous
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 8:19:39 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Simply nice to think and imagine_Soul