Haiku! Poem by Shahzia Batool

Haiku!



Nimbus lingered eyes
Night sleeps on a wet pillow
The star gaze gets blurred!

© Shahzia Naqvi

Haiku!
Thursday, May 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 30 September 2015

Superb one. 5-7-5 now Nimbus lingered eyes Night sleeps on a wet pillow The star gaze, blurred! ! !

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Queeny Gona 02 June 2015

Emotionally touching! Just in few lines the weight of a bitter heart is reflected in magnificent way!

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Valsa George 31 May 2015

In every sense a powerful haiku that speaks louder than a long poem about the melancholy lying frozen in the heart! Great job!

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Ramesh Rai 30 May 2015

Excellent emotional thoughts. Well done

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