Haiku # 1 ‘kaiku Haiku’ Poem by Subroto Chatterjee

yes; that won't be haiku then...good kaiku, Subroto

yeah vvery true indeed..goood versee....and advise for haiuku riters

yeh taken note of thanks for the advice anjali

Thanks the lesson... I had to look up your big word! Karin Anderson

Haiku should be crisp and clear Should spell the magic of words and logic, along with. The metrical phrase shouldnot pose like a - A roundabout figure of speech. Good Advice. Thank you.

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agree with mamta on this.....

arre haiku kaiku bombay mein rehne walon ko mere baap fursat kidhar hai

why only Haiku, all creative writers should avoid circumlocution, if they want to be understood. Haiku, because of its structure and norms, is a form which needs a lot of meditation before it flashes across your mind. then you say Eureka. we learn as we go good advise Subroto. you might enjoy my poem A pomegranate and a Haiku Mamta

Wow Cheers 10