Haiku # 1 Poem by Ruby Mostazir

oh so deep cant be spelt

5/7 /5 is the syllable count in a Haiku....the thought is very powerful...like it much

yes the syllable is as Wahab has stated good thought

yes the syllable is as Wahab has stated good thought

very simple, touchy and powerful lines.

Falling the drop yeah; cause of pain on the heart top!

Tear is compared with rain and this comparison values more as per natural perception. This poem is excellently penned.10

Excellent short poem...10+++

Tears and raindrops...... fine theme dear poet. tony

Droplet fall Tear or rain Both are causes Of pain ….. Beautiful haiku shared. Thanks for sharing.