Had You? Poem by Niken Kusuma Wardani

Had You?

Rating: 5.0


Had you forget the time you knock on my door?
One sweet touch and its wide open
Then we drawn on expected courtesy
I’d serve you the best corner to decorate
Free and content on yr possession

Had you lost yr key to recognize the place?
It’s been a pleasure to welcome you back
Surrender with the thought of sharing you the grand life
I lit the flame to cuddle your mind and let the time be our charm
But you never rest the nerve to melt with ease

Had you stole some of the dream?
It was gone leaving your bare foot step
It’s a treasure to keep my vanity and your sanity
Spend it wisely if you must or preserve it right
Seems like your fake intention had taken a part

Had you decide to ignore the beat?
The rush of emotion still playing to redeem our desire
Pour us the need to bind the tiny cell of mind
When I’m there and you’re not around
Or when you’re too lonely to have fun

Had you give up haunting me?
Coz you cherish the tattoo near my heart
Creep the night to greet me morning
Though I always fall for reason and alibi
I’d try to be fair ‘till the end of our line

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

It’s been a pleasure to welcome you back Surrender with the thought of sharing you the grand life I lit the flame to cuddle your mind and let the time be our charm '''''' had u decided to.... full invitation and getting confirmation... good imagination well weighed words... good write......10. Read mine ' brown eyes' and' butterflies aroudn>

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Lady Grace 24 June 2009

'Though I always fall for reason and alibi I’d try to be fair ‘till the end of our line '...these two lines are more touching than the others..but the others are more detailed than these 2 lines...it is very beautiful.. had you kept me in your heart? or had it been forgotten? hope you had not hope you have not...grace

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Surya . 24 June 2009

wonderful and meaningful.last para top it all. beautiful write voted10 surya

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Ency Bearis 24 June 2009

a passionate write...nice to read..lovely verses....10

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Rifqi Syahputra 29 December 2015

where are you now...

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Obinna Eruchie 24 June 2009

Wondrous and astonishing to read.

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~ Jon London ~ 24 June 2009

Visual passion expressed through colours of the heart..flooding the world with love.....beautiful work....I liked the tender voice of the speaker...it gives the piece warmth...nicely penned 10

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Omar Ibrahim 24 June 2009

it would be better if you tried to use the rhyme............but it is spectacular.......amazing.........and enjoyable to read........awesome write...

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 24 June 2009

Somewhere behind the rainbow, I had lost you.Had me really lost you?

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