' H2o { Senryu Poem } ' Poem by Ency Bearis

' H2o { Senryu Poem } '

Rating: 3.0


Its two oh's I said
To each gulp of iced water
Cools off summer heat

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 17 June 2013

Ah-ha, an up-side-down chemist. Careful there, tricks like that have a way of coming back to bite you. Read mine – An Acutely Obtuse Pythagorean Lyric – Adeline

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 23 April 2012

WOW! ! Coollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll Amazing..tenner ~ niv Please read/comment my I Want To Be Raped niv

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Wahab Abdul 25 March 2012

really oh's relief is the cool water........what a fantastic poem! in brief and short.......

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