Adeline Foster

Rookie - 261 Points (Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD)

.Guyana Voices


As a stallion, prancing, strong
I held my head above the throng,
Then stooped to kiss the lips so dear
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  • Rookie - 868 Points Lee Mack (12/27/2013 8:28:00 PM)

    wonderful as should be - wonderful....rare piece
    farmable, or the frame in art (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 25 Points Oyekake Satty (o. S.) Joshua (7/12/2013 9:51:00 PM)

    Adeline, this broke my heart! Yet, it's therapeutic. I know you had to write it, and from it surcease of any vestige of sadness. Thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 309 Points Poetheart Morgan (8/16/2012 1:53:00 PM)

    Who has talent, just has! ! ! Beautiful.If i have such dominion! ! ! ! From now on i'll studies his poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Phil Winter (7/9/2010 10:32:00 AM)

    You have managed to put into words feelings which others cannot articulate but with which they can empathize. Well done! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tiffny Rhodius (11/5/2009 7:19:00 PM)

    That's my country! Sadly its not in a good state now and the ending of your poem is so fitting to what's happening here. And on your comment about an Addict's Promise I am talking about the rum lol...we Guyanese like our rum although most can't hold it. In our creole: 'De brown rum does knock ya down.' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (8/5/2009 8:15:00 AM)

    Excellent vivid words tell your story through this moving poem. When we say 'I do' I feel we have no idea how hard our journey through life will be and we are a gift of ourself to our partner in love.
    I feel your passion and your pain and thank God for writing! An unforgettable poem for me Adeline.
    10 Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Laurie Hill (8/3/2009 4:29:00 PM)

    Such a sad and moving write, wonderfully penned, of a situation many would know (Report) Reply

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