Guests Of Sun, Moon Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Guests Of Sun, Moon

Rating: 5.0


the sun has fins
it swims through
the clear blue sky
casting lights off
its shimmering
gold scales

the moon has legs
it runs and glides
through the dark night
a lantern in hand
lighting up a poetic
landscape

the stars are
clever dancers
that twist, twirl, swirl,
in glistening
celestial outfits
at the behest
of sun and moon

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ********* 12 August 2006

A Gorgeous portrait of what makes our world keep turning John, so cosmic, smiling at you, Tai

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Sandra Fowler 12 August 2006

Dazzling and original imagery! Praise for your dancing stars.. Sandra

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john tiong chunghoo

john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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