Anthony Di'anno

Bronze Star - 2,804 Points (Yorkshire)

Growing Light - Poem by Anthony Di'anno

Growing light, may thy being ever shine,
Not be cloaked in grey falsely conjured cloud,
But unabashed across the reach of thine,
Through lilted wood where bird and insect crowd.

A giddy hush of variegated leaves,
Dancing upon delicate outstretched stems,
Looking to burst through crocheted canopies,
From scraunched broken shelled, dusty husk spilt hems.

Destined to fertilize the sacred ground,
Where their own scattered seeds will one day lay,
Until they are eventually found,
Where bright eyed smiles wash long shadows away.

For is not life pure contracted duty.
To nourish nature and sustain beauty?

Topic(s) of this poem: Love

Form: Sonnet

Comments about Growing Light by Anthony Di'anno

  • Gold Star - 20,255 Points Daniel Brick (3/29/2014 11:50:00 AM)

    You found exactly the right title for your sonnet, because it describes morning light growing stronger but also suggests the psychological illumination within the human observer. There is a wonderful stillness in this poem despite the activity of natural things it describes. The stillness is not something nature gives us; it's what you give us. And that's a profound power a poet can exercise. I love T.S.Eliot's line: THE STILL POINT OF A TURNING WORLD. His line is abstract, a generalization - your sonnet gives us the natural things which support the general statement. I just thought of another meaning of the title: this poem has made me GROW LIGHT - it has made me light-hearted on a dark spring afternoon! (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 510 Points Joseph Anderson (9/19/2013 5:20:00 PM)

    Move over Shakespeare, I have found a sonneteer who is in your league. Fabulous in form, execution and subject matter. Deep-deep. You should send more of thes`10 plus (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,112 Points Diane Hine (7/25/2013 6:49:00 AM)

    'giddy hush' and 'crocheted canopies' - gorgeous imagery and terrific last lines. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (7/16/2013 8:56:00 AM)

    a nice poem about nature. good images (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,679 Points Valerie Dohren (6/25/2013 4:50:00 PM)

    A well crafted sonnet Anthony, with some lovely descriptive lines. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 447 Points Danny Draper (6/24/2013 4:34:00 AM)

    A fine sonnnet with some great lines. Especially rich was line 8 and the question of the final couplet, while aged and anthropomorphic in the the role and value of nature is rich and finely composed. A smooth wisp in in that sun lit copse. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (6/22/2013 8:34:00 AM)

    A sonnet for re reading..
    Excellent rendering and good diction Mr Anthony. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,404 Points Valsa George (6/22/2013 5:32:00 AM)

    The sight of variegated leaves dancing upon delicate outstretched stems and scattered seeds under waiting for resurrection are all beautiful images! Enjoyed the poem greatly! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,445 Points Unwritten Soul (6/22/2013 12:43:00 AM)

    Yes i agree with all, nice poem with great it Anthony!
    Growing light from a land of dark..
    Where in the darkness we shall harvest the bright
    May our hearts find something as a light too
    because in your life always something for you
    _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,770 Points Paul Brookes (6/21/2013 1:04:00 PM)

    a beautiful nature poem with a great ending BB: OD (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,656 Points David Wood (6/21/2013 10:49:00 AM)

    A beautiful sonnet. You are a great sonneteer, such wonderful use of words. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,388 Points Lyn Paul (6/21/2013 8:04:00 AM)

    You have create a ray of light with your beautiful words. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 69,187 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/21/2013 7:56:00 AM)

    nourish nature and sustain beauty, good write, thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 21, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, February 4, 2015

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