! ***green When Awaits Rain ***! Poem by Dr subhendu kar
! ***green When Awaits Rain ***!
green awaits rain to sway and swaddle
yet swaggering of glow to earth beneath
thirst crunches being bereft of winy drunk
as sky is glorified being shinned of blue
dawn awes by blooming sun at its side
darkness melts as rays burns blacks of night
mirth sees its face on mirror of sparkling dew
moment is me and mine as i conquer crown
lily stealthily sates by glow of stars blinking
whites on petals reverberate by gloss of kiss
yet it beckons its head preening over gleams
blush enshrines sheathing half lipped smile
entirety elates on rungs of reeling freshness
heart touches bliss sprinkling from heaven
passion entices of fragrance from a rose
do we ever measure depth of dazzling shadow
moon when etches joy over speckles of ripples
To me the first stanza of the poem is an unfulfilled state of nature, nature awaits alleviation of its thirst.But second stanza onwards a satiated condition is described, darkness melts, mirth is reflected on mirror, lily sates etc. and finally moon etches joy over speckles of ripples. Your vocabulary is well arrayed over exquisite description of nature. A condition of self attainment is also described, viz., “moment is me and mine as I conquer crown”.Your poems are mesmesmerizing.Much more than full marks.
To me the first stanza of the poem is an unfulfilled state of nature, nature awaits alleviation of its thirst.But second stanza onwards a satiated condition is described, darkness melts, mirth is reflected on mirror, lily sates etc. and finally moon etches joy over speckles of ripples. Your vocabulary is well arrayed over exquisite description of nature. A condition of self attainment is also described, viz., “moment is me and mine as I conquer crown”.Your poems are mesmerizing.Much more than full marks.
Great poem and imagery I love it! A ten from me and great work - have added it to my facebook too micron
Is this a literary composition that you have written or a picture-perfect painting that you have created? Enjoyed reading and visualizing both! ! ! Thanks for sharing.
it's like looking a nice picture and its frame.... nice poem!
Unique and witty. I love how you described nature as if having human characteristics. Very interesting. Thanks for the read.
Very artfully composed. An original mind is certainly at work here. An exceptional pen portrait for your gallery.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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This is awesome. Loved the creational imagery and flow of the poem! Beautiful; D