Great Fear Poem by ramesh rai

Great Fear

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one of my friend asked me
whom do you fear?
i told
who loves me more
he asked for example
i told, my mother
he sought for next
i told, my betterhalf
he asked for third
i told
who has given birth
of the entire creation

Friday, September 12, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 September 2014

Greatest fear of the closest ones. One is always truthful to one's closest. Beautifully expressed Rameshji. Thank you.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 13 September 2014

a fear chain that is chained concluding I fear the creator

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Akhtar Jawad 12 September 2014

This a description of ladders of divine love which ultimately makes one very near and close to God.

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Khalida Bano Ali 12 September 2014

Preferences of great fear show the deep thinking of the poet. Nice poem.

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