Graven Greediness Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Graven Greediness

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A child when born is without vice,
But he or she falls in greed when takes rice.
Among vices greediness is one like vice,
It does dilate everywhere like mice.

Greed plays a vital role in the society,
Greedy becomes grievous greed is mighty.
Cupidity fixates in fitments and humdinger,
Fixated persons dance in the greed's finger.

Avarice grows in the greedy's mind,
He or she imagines earning having no kind.
We see for wealth many people do harm,
Their inhuman acts fed people's charm.

Beauty of things or persons attracts some,
Mignonette brings the eyes of bees with hum.
Attracted creatures are trapped in greed,
Like a fish of cupidity is trapped in feed.

We can away from greediness if we want,
We should be labourious and brave like ant.
We ought to know that matters are extinct,
Righteous qualities are eternal and also distinct.

Let's have values always in our lives,
No harm can do Graven Greediness-knives.
Meditate to God brings peace in mind,
We will get love, happiness, we will be kind.

Wednesday, November 5, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: greed
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In this poem poet has described about the greediness. When a child born, he has no vice but gradually greed fixates the child at the rate of his or her growing. There are many vices like lust, anger, attachment, bad habits etc. Greediness is one of them. It attaches the persons to the lovely things like the attachment of a vice. Here vice means instrument with two jaws between which a thing may be gripped. It spreads everywhere like the mice. Greed plays negatively an important role in the society which makes a man greedy. Greedy wants many things like fitments and humdingers and to get, he or she becomes grievous. Avarice person earn money and wealth by any means and he or she has no kindness. Greedy persons fed the peaceful mind and charm. Some beautiful things or persons attract the greedy. A plant with small fragrant greyish-green flowers named mignonette attracts the bees that hum.Fish in water is attracted the feeding in a small curved nail by the person. In greed fish eats and does loss life. If we desire we can remove the greed. We have to labour hard in a righteous way like ants. We should know that matters are like earthen pots which are perishable, but virtuous qualities like purity, love, nonviolence, kindness etc. are eternal and distinct. Poet at last requests the people to have values in life and meditate to God for they can get peace, love, happiness, and kindness in which the Graven Greediness like a sharp knife can't do any harm. This is the theme of the poem in brief. It is written in Deogarh, Odisha, India on this day of 5th November,2014 and is dedicated to the people of the World.
Glossary
Graven - firmly fixed
Vice - instrument with two jaws between which a thing may be gripped
Dilate - spread
Grievous - causing grief/injurious
Cupidity - greed
Fixate - cause to acquire abnormal attachment for persons or things
Avarice - extreme greed for wealth
Mignonette - plant with small fragrant greyish-green flowers
Extinct - no longer existing
Distinct - clearly perceptible
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Innocence diminishes progressively on the path of man's life as greed develops. Life values are redefined. The need of devotion to God is emphasised gain peace

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 10 November 2014

Changing attitude and attribution of vice- (When I born I was Gangotri- I don't know why I have became Salty sea) the poem is about -how greed breeds and destroys - your pen runs on humanity and guidance of highway

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 06 November 2014

The very truth spelt out here that greed corrupts human minds....very well composed with wonderful and inspiring words........

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Hazel Durham 06 November 2014

So true greed is like a weed unsightly and of no use, shallow and bleak greed can't compete with love and kindness that blooms forever! Great write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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