! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! **grave Of Soul***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

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Rating: 2.7


GRAVE OF SOUL

In midst of my universe
I stand upon void by silence
Breath calls upon lone voice
To see my love deep within

Warmth seems swooning quest
at altar of your askance of your black eyes
And my splintered body cries by pain
disinterring grave of my soul

as I meet you there again
love when seemingly unrequited
darkness dispels illusion
as you embrace me I feel disillusioned.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarvesh Kulkarni 04 April 2010

a little bit vague...but thats the beauty of it. nice poem. thank you.

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Marieta Maglas 05 April 2010

very interesting poem...excellent philosophical piece, at the same time...thank you for sharing.. 10/10/10

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Pranab K Chakraborty 07 April 2010

darkness dispels illusion as you embrace me I feel disillusioned. ........ perhaps its much spoken about 'Grave of Soul'. Oh, poet, you are great, you don't know what you have written. Just try to feel it again. A poet friend.

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Luz Hanaii 19 November 2011

Deep and mysterious, well penned.

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Cailin O'Malley 19 May 2010

I adore this! You have a real gift at the art of writing. Thank you so much for posting it here!

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Bijaylaxmi Sarangi 28 April 2010

Wonderful poem...very touching.

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Swatimalya Chattopadhyay 19 April 2010

A terse, fantastic, romantic poem.The poet has aptly expressed the situation when the human mind is skeptical in receiving love in equal proportion from the beloved.It creates an all pervading pain.But the doubt gets dispelled with the physical amalgamation.Very well written Subhendu as always.

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Rani Turton 15 April 2010

Sad and emotional, grave, indeed! But the emotion comes through to the reader intact.

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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