Grave Error Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

Grave Error



In common with Winston Churchill
I have seen, perhaps,
the end of a beginning:
I have learnt that 'Egyptian' is 'Masri'.
My 'Beginning Arabic' is at, perhaps, an end.

I don't know, does anyone know,
if the Prime man ever saw
the beginning of the end of the war?
Can anyone ever surely say
they've seen the beginning of the end of a war?

I do know that in Egypt
you mightn't see the end of a day,
if, instead of 'I love The Great Haram',
you accidentally, or deliberately, say,
'I greatly love haraam.'

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
About the El Alamein victory, Churchill said something like: '...this is not the end. It is not even the beginning of the end. But it is, perhaps, the end of the beginning.'
pyramid = 'Haram'.
You can google 'haraam'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Draper 30 June 2013

Intriguing concepts save for mistakenly being restricted by religious dogma. One should avoid such unfortunate imponderables of human constructs.

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Douglas Scotney

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Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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