Grant Poem by Adens Kamwi

Grant

Rating: 5.0


you are the last twinkle in the sky before the dawn breaks
the precious candle that never dies
a piece of heaven is what you are
a darling soul from afar
who rests without you in mind?
who dreams without you is blind
you are my last breath
my joy
my only mistress
if life grants me peace
if it grants me happiness
if it grants me riches
if it grants me love
then you are that grant
and for that Life i thank

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hannah Adams 23 November 2009

o wow, this one has so much honest depth and beauty. It is very convincing! I truly thought it was BEAUTIFUL!

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Marieta Maglas 24 November 2009

nice extended metaphor you are the last twinkle in the sky before the dawn breaks the precious candle that never dies nice lyric poem 10

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Obinna Eruchie 24 November 2009

Heartwarming words you have penned.

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Luwi Habte 24 November 2009

ah nice poem please so creative also well penned ideas well done there luwi

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A lovely poem Adens with heartfelt verses...

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Bryan Alexander 23 November 2009

written with a silver pen....keep em' comin...we need more who speak from the soul.....

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Adens Kamwi

Adens Kamwi

Katima Mulilo, Namibia
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