Goodbye To Love Poem by Brittney Miller

Goodbye To Love



Goodbye love
you must leave me at once
I can't take it no more
you forcing me to fall for guys
who will never love me back

One who looks at me
as a sister and not a lover
so love you must say good bye
for you caused my to much pain

I'm tried of you dictating my life
making leaving me totally insecure
so go away leave me angry leave me sad
I don't care just leave me alone

for love you made me fall for one other
who broke my heart without even knowing it
when i went to confess how I felt
he was with a another

So love you are nothing more but a flag
gentle waved in my face but when I reached
for you the the wind blows
you at of my grasp so goodbye forever love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

the last verse is great, comparing flag with love, that's great thought. the poem is good and appealing to those who know what love is. i also liked the title.

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Donielle Smith 24 October 2009

Hi, Brittney, I can really relate to this particular poem, because I've been there a time or two myself. I enjoyed reading it. The art of poetry flows creatively from you heart. Continuted success! ! Donielle S.

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