Goodbye Sweet Lover Poem by Adrian Pena

Goodbye Sweet Lover



Goodbye my sweet lover
Our time together is through
But tucked in my heart, forever
Will be memories of you
No one else will know you
As I did in that time
When we were in love
And when you were once mine
Now separate paths we must take
Distant strangers our fate
But in my heart u remain
Just for old times sake......

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 04 March 2012

Two more line....just two more lines and we will have had a sonnet....gud poem...nice flows...kudos and keep it up. You can read my poem..We kissed gudbye on a silent morning and Written in harmattan season..you will like it. Thanks for sharing.

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Dead Leaf 04 March 2012

It is hard to forget our love forever..memories never ends.as waves in a sea they will come one after another to our mind..pain of lossing some one is too deep.hope you will survive It soon

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Dead Leaf 04 March 2012

It is hard to forget our love forever..memories never ends.as waves in a sea they will come one after another to our mind..pain of lossing some one is too deep.hope you will survive It soon

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The sorrow carried by this work brings nothing but painfull memories of the past, it is always hard to part ways with people that have been of much value to your life, especially if it is your lover, great work there, after all poetry is meant to inspire and touch hearts The_African_Son

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The sorrow carried by this work brings nothing but painfull memories of the past, it is always hard to part ways with people that have been of much value to your life, especially if it is your lover, great work there, after all poetry is meant to inspire and touch hearts The_African_Son

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The sorrow carried by this work brings nothing but painfull memories of the past, it is always hard to part ways with people that have been of much value to your life, especially if it is your lover, great work there, after all poetry is meant to inspire and touch hearts The_African_Son

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The sorrow carried by this work brings nothing but painfull memories of the past, it is always hard to part ways with people that have been of much value to your life, especially if it is your lover, great work there, after all poetry is meant to inspire and touch hearts The_African_Son

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The sorrow carried by this work brings nothing but painfull memories of the past, it is always hard to part ways with people that have been of much value to your life, especially if it is your lover, great work there, after all poetry is meant to inspire and touch hearts The_African_Son

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