! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Goodbye- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Goodbye- Haiku! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 2.5


Heavy hands lift axe,
Dig a grave at cemetery;
Light drizzle from sky.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakesh Bedi 29 August 2009

Good-byes are usually painful, mamta; full of sobs, tears and sighs, again you have depicted a human emotion dramatically and tenderly.... light drizzzle from sky.....wasn't sky torn in two? ? ?

0 0 Reply
Sathyanarayana M V S 29 August 2009

Straight from a Hollywood movie? ? ? ! ! ! The scene just played wild before my eyes.

0 0 Reply
Sandra Fowler 12 September 2009

God counts our human tears. This I believe. Very poignant.Fragiile as a shadow. As always, Sandra

0 0 Reply
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 05 September 2009

AN OPEN RETURN TICKET WE HAVE...DATE HE FIXES

0 0 Reply
Sandra Martyres 01 September 2009

Lovely imagery in this Haiku Mamta.... even the skies are shedding tears...10

0 0 Reply
Deepti Agarwal 31 August 2009

SO very painful this is.. Good Bye's are always saddening.. n Final goodbye's are even more tearful..

0 0 Reply
Miriam Maia Padua 29 August 2009

vivid picture from your haiku.. sad depart... from ashes to ashes...dust to dust.. drizzles play a very significant role... for, as the elders said when it drizzles...it means she/he will be missing us.. 10 Maia

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success