'Goodbye' Poem by lil island Gal

This is good love, but break the spell, , ,

its really a good poem.short and painful..and i feel sometime we don't trust the words of others as we think of ourself only......someone promised not to leave me but told goodbye....so i can feel whta you are feeling....... its nice creation and keep writing like this

ya very beatiful poem, nice words thanks

I will remember him not as the one who broke my heart, but as the one who taught me how to live with a broken heart..! almost a proverb u fashioned there... great writing cheers

It is simple and straight poem dear friend! very honest, it reflects the inner scenary! and I always feeling nice for those who get me in some emotional troubles.. they put us to the real test of life, and that is how we can learn something true! you are right! 10

WOW....strong young lady it shows in your poem.....its just like 'Smile behind the Pain' i like your lines 'I will remember him not as the one who broke my heart, but as the one who taught me how to live with a broken heart..! ' ....positive outlook on LOVE....10++++++++

Don't say goodbye when he's not.

This is such a touching piece, the words echoe the feeling..that is sure to ripple across distant waters..to reach a loves heart....excellent flow of emotion. best of health & happiness Jon