Good Result Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Good Result

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Even as good neighbor
We were not together
Not by thoughts or by any ideals
The thaw was apparent and real

From childhood days
We had parted ways
He used to be little harsh and non accommodative
I was too adamant and subjective

Now we have turned adult
Earned so much and built
Houses of our choice
To live with family with promises

Old enmity lasts longer
Its roots are going deeper and deeper
It continues even for generations
One must strive hard to improve relation

I tried to break impasse
‘Hello” I addressed when he passed
He did not expect me to address
He bore smile and showed sign of happiness

The trend definitely altered
We were moving ahead and always offered
Greetings were exchanged and frequent meetings took place
Now we are good neighbor and have no bitter case

One needs to keep option open
Think positively and prepare even
To compromise on some issues
It can bring good result to view

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 April 2014

Even as good neighbor We were not together

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 April 2014

Rohani Daud likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 April 2014

Interesting. Siwar Maalej11 minutes ago I like it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 April 2014

happy end Donka Krsteva28 minutes ago well told; enjoyed it Comment 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 April 2014

not bad Andrew Collins12 minutes ago A lot of feeling in this poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 April 2014

i really enjoyed this poem swedishpoet.4 minutes ago thanks for sharing :) Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 April 2014

Long katie_m_horan3 minutes ago Its great but a little too long

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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