Marvin Brato Sr

Rookie - 123 Points (March 2,1960 / Davao City, Philippines)

Good Notion


Black and white hues defined life
in variable degree either joy or strife
fate is unpredictable so are our dreams
like water from rains cascading into streams
becomes a river flows to the ocean of emotion
exciting tears of joy or sadness depend on notion.

Time comes when existence is filled with burden
it make us melancholic and our feelings are sadden
discouragement overcomes us becoming pessimistic
that we start to feel useless, empty and not optimistic
as such life for us becomes darkness like a chaotic prison
a dead end when anger and self pity dominates our notion.

Yet even in total darkness there is an ember of hope
when the heart still beats in rhythm with a life to cope
then the mind lit the conscience of wisdom with an insight
and with prayer God will enlightened our soul with foresight
then illuminates the darkness in us into bright colored rainbow
like newborns we're alive again so letting go of is a good notion.

Submitted: Friday, January 10, 2014
Edited: Saturday, January 11, 2014

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Unwritten Soul (1/11/2014 8:31:00 AM)

    The poem that have many values to appreciate and the value that i like most is inside this lines..
    Time comes when existence is filled with burden
    it make us melancholic and our feelings are sadden
    discouragement overcomes us becoming pessimistic
    that we start to feel useless, empty and not optimistic
    ...later you bring lot of life scenario..and tell that how we still can win in life challenge..nice one! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,560 Points Dinesh Nair (1/11/2014 3:50:00 AM)

    A poem that instills hope and optimism and this notion you have advocated for is universally a fact that works on the minds and the human stocks. A fine sharing Marvin Brato. (Report) Reply

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