'Good Morning' Poem by Valsa George

'Good Morning'

Rating: 5.0


Pushing the shroud of darkness
From Night’s tenebrous sepulcher
A new day emerges
Like a babe smiling through tears
I hear it knocking at my door
I don’t know if it brings delight
Or despondency in its wake
However I shall greet it
With a ‘Good Morning’!

Wednesday, October 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: morning
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Madathil Rajendran Nair 08 October 2015

Good Morning Ma'am! That is spirit after two despondent Senryus! A 10 for the tenebrous sepulcher alone.

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Kelly Kurt 08 October 2015

Yes, A wonderful morning to you, Ma'am. Lovely poem

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Rajnish Manga 08 October 2015

To me it is like the commentary of a mega event having the backing of certain smaller events shrouded in uncertainty. The emergence of a dawn and the birth of a new day was never so radiant: A new day emerges / Like a babe smiling through tears

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Loke Kok Yee 08 October 2015

Good morning Valsa, I hope this brings you delight.-10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 October 2015

Very fantastic write. Depicted with briliant phraseology. Let the morning brings you delight instead of despondency......10

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Hazel Durham 28 September 2018

Morning greets us every day, sometimes it is not a welcome sight, but most times it is a symbol of joy and a feeling of anything is possible! Superb write!

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Kavya . 21 October 2015

every new day is a Hope given by God for making it extra special. A very Good Morning and Good Day to you Mam

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 16 October 2015

Verily, a positive attitude and optimistic approach towards life......10

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Om Chawla 15 October 2015

Piercing the gloom of night a new dawn emerges like a 'babe smiling through tears'; though uncertain it is welcome.Very well written, Valsa.

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Lyn Paul 14 October 2015

Positive always you are and relaying these words to us all.

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