Good Morning Poem by tanya gupta

Good Morning

Rating: 2.5


GOOD MORNING

Every morning,
when i get up from my bed,
i goes to the garden,
and stand under a tree's shed.
all trees pretend green,
sky looks blossam clean.
it makes me wonder about a thing,
how the birds beautifully sing.
the sun comes from behind the clouds,
giving rays which makes us proud.
soft wind comes onto my face,
leaving behind a beautifull grace.
i want to hold all of them,
but its more than what i can.
morning that comes to make a day,
gives everyone an opportunity to pray.
there is happiness in every lane,
it takes away all the bane.
and gives a chance to something gain.
Morning gives an echo in the heart,
with a fresh approach,
let the day start,
let the day start.

Friday, February 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: inspirational
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 14 February 2014

with a fresh approach, I like it, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and publish it if you so like.

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V P Mahur 25 February 2014

lovely poem. sweet touch of feels. I like it. Plz read my poems and match your views with me.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 28 February 2014

Nice imagery......tanya...........the first light of morning fascinates all.....how fair it is when the wonderful hour of the Nature comes awake bringing newborn gladness in faces all........well written......thanks

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Md Asadullah 02 March 2014

Vivid imagery, I like it, thanks for sharing :)

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Thomas Duncky 22 March 2014

Let the day start indeed. Another visionary piece from you!

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Geetha Jayakumar 09 July 2014

Beautiful and quiet refreshing poem to start a day with. I loved the nature you used to describe the freshness of morning. Loved reading it.

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Aryaman Kakkar 26 June 2014

Very nice writing ms Tanya you just expressed what no one can in simple words. Beautiful

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Hira Akhtar 23 April 2014

tanya! Its a sweet poem wondering the colours of nature, their creature and awe-inspiring views of morning..... But if you can edit some spelling mistakes then it'd be more lovely :) regards hira

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Biplab Singha 30 March 2014

Tanya, a sweet and great relation you draw between you and the mature. Very beautiful I like it. ...it makes me woder about a thing/how the birds beautifully sing.... ...I want to hold all of them/it's more than what I can...

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Subhakanta Sahu 26 March 2014

Hi Tanya! I like the lineit gives an echo in the heart, with a fresh approach, let the day start, let the day start. most. I wish each of your day start with good thoughts.

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