Treasure Island

Abdul Wahab


Good Deeds and Pray


Three times I fell
On the same place same time

Every day where sun shines
For the same fault

is it my fate or destiny
or the reason of my carelessness

may not be any one
or may be all of them

but the fact is that
I fell three times

Are all my works
And all my pray useless?

Can not I change my destiny
Can not I own my fate?

Yes, you can, nothing is fixed
They say

There are many ways
Of course, two of them are

Good deeds and pray
Done in good intention and good way

Submitted: Tuesday, June 04, 2013
Edited: Friday, August 02, 2013

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  • Heather Wilkins (6/6/2013 10:29:00 AM)

    I love the thoughts in this poem. It gives each one some hope that we can control the future. I fell three times also but I keep pressing forward. Excellent write. (Report) Reply

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