Good Catch Poem by ONElia AVElar

Less a victim - more a willing sacrifice is my guess. Delicious. Rgds, Ivan

yet the marvel alone simlply dazzling over blue dreams when splendoured unequalled across the sweetness of the soul...............a unique poem by the luscious green with ingenuity, i do simply adfmire the way you paints the atr by the softness with gentle words, great write, it demands 10+, thanks dear Onlia for sharing

Your dreamcatcher, mancatcher pillow! Happy hunting, One! F

Caught me! Lovely poem O.... Rogerx

Mmm... sounds like a Mer-man! Love it! HG; -) xx

This reminds me of the Little Mermaid (not the Disney one) but the age-old story... It is very pretty and says so much in so few words. Very clever word-weaving my friend. HG: -) xx

i loved this poem for its sheer beauty, , it capsules the emotion and imagery with its beautiful compactness, it throws open many variety of interpretation, , , ,

a succinct poem..dreamcatcher...wonderful imagery

A composition of a dream, an image of love.10..

Beautiful - a mermaid, a siren and an enchantress, all pictured in four lines.