Good Bye Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Good Bye

Rating: 4.9


It is time to say good bye,
amidst small gathering and cry,
Soul to depart from body and fly,
No one knows where and why?

Always stayed among kith and kin
Struggled hard though not very keen
So much load on solder as it had always been
So many odds against but clear path seen

Kept all flocks under shed and together
Waging a struggle and not thought to bother
Continued to strive very hard and survived
Explored all possible means and revived

Lived life to the extent possible,
Made it easy though looked impossible,
Discharged obligations to the last end,
Sensed eternal signals which were send,

Many things were done and remained undone,
Received acclaim from friends as well done,
Considered life as meaningful and good mission,
No doubts ever occurred as matter of question

Will my work remain not to be in time finished?
Chances are not bright and seems to be diminished
though life remained fulfilled and has no regret,
it’s time to sleep peacefully and rest to forget,

Will my living not be exemplary and remembered?
Ideas may soon be forgotten and pushed in corner
This may take place or happen later or sooner,
It is a lesson for the learner or beginner

I may have not lived up to the expectations,
May have many emissions and omissions,
Might have not yielded to the submissions,
But always have resisted the temptations

Ambition and desire may remain always a concern
Attempt to disassociate will be a lesson to learn
Sun always shined and brought ray of hope,
Descending was easy even in high slopes

it gives enough joy And contentment
Life seems to be a mission for fulfillment
Might have faced rough weather sometimes
Everybody in life faces good or bad times




Eyes are filled with joy and unhappiness
When you became familiar with closeness
It was happy union but soon to come to an end
You had to leave everybody including friends

It is not easy to forget log association
Either in service, circle or with family
Sometimes we might have acted silly
But it would have been atmosphere homely

It is tearful and sad departure
You may feel end in near future
It is simple law of nature
Just get top of it and be sure

Final journey to bid farewell and bye,
Not enough time to say even lie,
Permanent position to find and go,
Leaving behind memories and forgo

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Umesh Lalvani 12 August 2009

it is time to say final bye....10

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Lalvani Rekha 13 August 2009

time has come to say bye....10

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Shilpa Maheswari 14 August 2009

time to say bye to all...10

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Vijay Suwarnkar 15 August 2009

time for final departure/////10

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Indani Narayan 16 August 2009

end time has come near....10

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Charlotte Andreski 27 December 2009

if we say no helllo's may we say no goodbye's? not quite. so emotional, touching.

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Sachin Goswami 01 October 2009

Stayed among kith and kin, Struggled hard though not so keen, So much load on solder as always been,

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Severina Dsouza 17 September 2009

It is time to say good bye, Amidst small gathering and cry, Soul to depart and fly, No one knows where and why?

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Ketan Rajgor 11 September 2009

It is time to say good bye, Amidst small gathering and cry, Soul to depart and fly, No one knows where and why? ..............10

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Darshna Chopra 04 September 2009

Stayed among kith and kin, Struggled hard though not so keen, ....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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