Ken e Hall

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Gone with the wind... My love


Gone with the wind... My love my love
Inner tornado's uproot my beating heart
Casting it aside into loneliness,
Feelings carving the painful lost memories
Within my soul,
I thought I had it all, love togetherness happiness
Now all gone as in a Meteors trail of dust.
My unconscious conscious new
But would never whisper to me,
Or converse with me frightened to spoil my comfort zone
The late nights out with her “Friends”
The weekend away with her old school “Friends”
You unconscious conscious liar, lying to my brain
“Isn’t it nice having old friends”
A fool in a fool’s paradise is I my love
All I have left now is a letter simply saying...’Goodbye’

Submitted: Tuesday, June 25, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, June 26, 2013

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  • Silver Star - 3,342 Points Patricia Grantham (8/15/2013 8:47:00 PM)

    Love has taken a turn for the worst and can't be mended right now.
    Will take some time to mend after being torn apart. Strong winds will
    blow that only you and your lover will know. When you have time I invite
    you to read Lost and Found and If We Ever Meet Again. Enjoyed your write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 351 Points Patti Masterman (8/14/2013 5:11:00 PM)

    I hope this is only hyperbole. It is a very stirring piece. No one likes to play the fool, we always
    want to be the lover, or the hero.. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 519 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (7/4/2013 2:18:00 AM)

    I understand. Try Surprise Surprise when you have a spare minute. Best regards. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 127 Points Allemagne Roßmann (7/3/2013 4:29:00 PM)

    She languished in the portico
    of her lover
    tongue-in groove,
    archway of his desire- -

    Courtesy- Kristin Scott

    great lines hereby (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Unwritten Soul (7/3/2013 11:14:00 AM)

    So much emotion written in every line, just dig the words and it still deep there...nice Ken, Luvli one_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,730 Points Heather Wilkins (6/27/2013 9:59:00 AM)

    A fool in a fool's paradise is I my love. good quote Gone with the wind (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (6/27/2013 6:22:00 AM)

    sadly you were just second best
    didn't muster enough
    to pass the test.
    Have you keep to heart
    just that you remember
    the sky is full of stars (Report) Reply

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