Gone With The Tide Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Gone With The Tide

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A tide had come.
It washed away everything.
Leaving nothing on the shore.
All the happiness and excitement,
It took away along with it.
Nothing left on shore.
Just a song of silence,
Played by wind can be heard.
All the liveliness gone along with the tide.
Just a whisper of calmness can be heard.
Now its like a blank paper waiting to be filled.
But the ink of joy dried away forever.
No new song could fill this blank paper
Let's make a boat of it
And float it on the river.
Let it flow along with the wind
After a time it will just sink deep down into the tide.
Yeah, a song can be heard in future
Of the dead boats end! ! !

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sumi Nair

Submitted: Saturday, October 05,2013
Edited: Monday, October 07,2013
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 12 November 2017

nice collocations. Thanks for sharing.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 November 2017

nice collocationsw. Thanks for sharing.10

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Hazel Durham 28 March 2017

So original I love this brilliant write with your great imagination you have crafted a gem of a poem! !

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 07 December 2014

This is very insightful can be related to our life......Geetha......so wonderfully crafted with nice metaphor.....amazing write.......

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