Gone With The Ferries (Villenelle) Poem by Milica Franchi De Luri

Gone With The Ferries (Villenelle)



Yonder, in my garden there are ferries.
I saw them laughing, playing,
climbing trees, eating cherries..........

Look through the bushes of the raspberries.
On my hammock they are swaying.
Yonder, in my garden there are ferries.

I had a glimpse in the world of ferries.
They were hugging, kissing, love displaying,
climbing trees, eating cherries...........

Now angels are descending in the strawberries
Angels and ferries together are preying.
Yonder, in my garden there are ferries.

Leave my angels and ferries to their chantries
soon they'll be finished and start flying,
climbing trees, eating cherries..........

It's a blessing to have angels and ferries,
in my garden, heavenly messages conveying.
Yonder, in my garden there are ferries,
climbing trees, eating cherries.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Knight 21 March 2010

Ho Milica - A beautiful regal name meaning GRACIOUS. You have been very graciuos in sharing your poerty ans I am honoured to be the first to comment on this GEM. The VILLENELLE is a perfect poetic form in which to express the ephemeral beauty of FERRIES and the transient beauty of the garden. This - Milica is a PERFECT POEM. Verse One. The reality of the 'Ferries in your garden' laughing - playing - climbing trees - eating cherries - AWESOME. Verses two and three and four.. Lovely word-play and visual images - Rasberries - Strawberries - Angels - Displaying pure love and innocence - Hugging - Kissing - BEAUTIFUL I LOVE IT. Verses five and six - 'You are nearer God's Heart in a Garden than anywhere else on Earth'. This is glimpe of Heaven - Milica - The Angels and the Ferries come and go but while they are there - and you really really see them - 'In my garden - heavenly messages conveying' You are BLESSED - AMAZING. I have read hundreds of poems on PH Milica - but this is the lovliest - reading it has lifted my soul to heaven. It is lovely Spring Morning here in the UK and as I look out of the window at my lovely garden - through the eyes of your poem - I caught a glimpse of the Angels and the Ferries - playing and laughing among the Spring Flowers and I too am blessed. Thank you for sharing and opening all our ees to the Spiritual Dimension. Love you in Poetry - JOHN .

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