Gone Poem by Brie Carter

Gone

Rating: 5.0


God took you away
It doesn't seem fair
But in the back of my mind
You will always be there

You weren't a close friend
But our paths did cross
And your absence in this world
Is to me a great loss

You were too young to die, and
Too innocent to feel that pain
Only Heaven benifits
Because you it has now gained

I may think of you a little less
With each passing day
But your strength is something I won't forget
You have changed me in a way

I wish for you eternal peace
That's what you deserve my friend
I hope to lead my life well enough
To meet up with you in the end

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Enya Wynants 03 August 2009

Omg! I wish I could write like that! I really really like it!

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Tanya Stanford 03 October 2008

A beautiful tribute to a lost one. Sadness looms out of this piece of poetry. Guess that's what it is suppose to do. Brilliant write.

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