Gone Poem by Olivia Braun

Gone

Rating: 5.0


I wish I could figure out a way to say
How much pain you put me through that day
Just a kid who made mistakes
You took my love and threw it away
I’m not sorry
I’m not perfect
I just guess you thought
I just WASN’T worth it
Well what I have to say
Is all the LoVe
I had for you
Just turned into Hate

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 06 September 2012

You said it well. Now throw away the hate so it will not be a part of you. Then, write poems about other subjects: trees, the wind, a kitten, anything but love. Read mine - Night Shift - Adeline

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left alone and forgotten 30 April 2009

wow! great poem! ! 10++++ keep it up! !

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Emily Oldham 03 October 2008

great poem, thanks

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Rani Turton 16 April 2008

Disillusion and reality put simply, very touchingly. If someone causes you pain its them who are the losers. Walk straight and tall, Olivia.

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Marvin Brato 11 December 2007

Nice poem, simply meaningful. Thanks, a 10.

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