Golden Brown Poem by Mary Forrester

Golden Brown

Rating: 5.0


Leaves fading golden brown
Touching down upon the mossy ground
Slivers of daylight
Catching the darkened clouds
Flickers of sunlight thread across
The silver rippling stream
On the bank side grasses swaying
Creatures flitter
Like spirits dancing on a breeze.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 01 September 2013

An absolute beauty of a poem! You have captured a particular moment, a scenery that the readers can clearly see as they read the poem. Flickers of sunlight thread across The silver rippling stream Wow! What an imagery! 10/10

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John Brown 27 November 2012

Nice poem Mary. Short but sweet.

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