Steven SRS

Rookie (Oct.27 1957 / Oakland California)

Going Down - Poem by Steven SRS

When it goes
Down it goes
Down in flames
And when it ends
It ends in pain.

(this was about love affairs when they end)

(But later I got to be thinking about how 'going down' took on a new meaning later in my life so a rewrite was in order.)

When I go
Down I go
Down between your legs
And when it ends
It ends in ecstasy!

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Comments about Going Down by Steven SRS

  • Rookie Kasey Graham (6/25/2010 3:22:00 AM)

    Well, I can honestly say that I appreciated the hinting in the first, more so than the direct. I know, there's great irony in my having made this comment! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 13, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 13, 2009

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