Going Camping Poem by Kim Barney
Going Camping
Camping is the greatest thing
a family can do.
All of that togetherness
MUST be good for you.
But chances are it'll be too hot,
or rain will spoil the day
and what was dust will turn to mud
in which the kids will play.
The biting flies will fill the skies,
mosquitoes make you sore,
but never fear, because next year
we'll be right back for more!
If I ever find the original (and it is different)I will revise this version.
written as remembered 19 September 2014
Recife, Pernambuco, Brasil
My gawd, Kim Is it possible I have found a poet that writes poetry that rhymes? Just got here a few days ago and the search is under way. Free verse turns me off as I consider it rhetoric and not poetry at all. Just my opinion but I am stuck with it. I really enjoyed this verse. Moves nicely and a pleasure to read. You get a 10 mostly because it is such a relief to find what to me is valid poetry... As Benny Hill would say? Whose the Clever Boy?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 1:11:48 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Hey! I like this poem, too. Well done!