Goddess In Maine Poem by GJG Elton

Goddess In Maine



There lives a young Goddess in Maine
Over me, I'd allow her to reign
Though miles apart
she reclaimed my heart
and someday, I'll marry again

Copyright © 2013 -

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Since I am not a poet, I had a difficult time with the 4th and 5th lines. on the fourth line, instead of 'reclaimed', I toyed with 'restole' and 'still stole'. On the 5th line, instrad of 'someday', I toyed with 'I hope to' and 'I wish to'...

If anyone out there has an opinion, and why, I would love to hear from you.

Thanks for reading.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gjg Elton 08 March 2013

Cute limerick. Although I have nothing to say about your other possibles

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
GJG Elton

GJG Elton

Philadelphia, PA
Close
Error Success