God's Mistake...... Poem by Sebastine Humaemo

God's Mistake......

Rating: 5.0


I couldn' t forget the best eve in my life
with my face on your laps seeing your eyes
tears rolling down your lips
seemed to be your lovable soul at the edge of a cliff
the way your fingers cared my hair
made me think I am gonna miss your lovable care
I could sense your lips trying to speak
but you couldn't do but only weep
with tears you whispered love you much in my ear
and asked, why I did' n met you before an year
with pain we gonna disappear like a mare
and sure God ' s decision in our case is not fair............

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mugano Paul 04 January 2009

DOES GOD MAKE MISTAKES? Beloved, I totally disagree with you. However, if you are about a god made by human hands you are right in every word. But my God, the Alpha and Omega, the One who created all that we see and will never see... He is the Almighty, Alwise God. He will never make a mistake. Tell you something; check the god you are talking about here! It is such an abomination to speak ill of Him who has power over life and death. Watch you! I know the God Who makes No mistakes. Greetings from Uganda.

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Winnie Angel 04 January 2009

its a trully expressive poem abt true feelings one has felt or one who understands..i liked the simple yet sweet feelings with poignat feelings Winnie

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MoonJ 19 September 2018

God is too loving to hurt you! God is too wise to make a mistake! With power over the entire universe, He freely gives us the free will to do our desire! With power to destroy, He shows mercy by giving plenty more chances to live again even after all our sins! Gives us all, even the last drop of His blood! Gives us hope by rising back to Life! Dear Seb! How could you tell that God ain't fair? Is there a greater love? Who could both die and live for you?

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 14 March 2009

We meet and depart from people as per his will. His will is mysterious and all wise.......... Good Write......

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 14 March 2009

We meet and depart from people as per his will. His will is mysterious and all wise.......... Good Write......

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 26 January 2009

the emotion was fantastic..sad..sometimes i wonder if god does anything correctly

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Deepti Agarwal 19 January 2009

its a lovely poem where u brought down the pain of not meeting someone at the right time(or so we thought of it like that) ... but tell u what... A Lesson of Life... Whatever happens happens for good.....

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