God, Is This The World You Have Created? Poem by nader baheri

God, Is This The World You Have Created?

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1-The minds full of lust
The minds full of lies

2-The world full of darkness
The world full of dirts

3-The world full of people like you like me
Using beautiful words when we need

4-The world full of injustice
Both in West and East

5-The world full of women who have lost their purity
For earning property

6-The world full of hate
In each time, in each date

7-So many racism, so many contempt
So many people who always pretend

8-GOD,
Is this the world you created

9-GOD,
I am sick and tired of living
there haven't been anything interesting
for me on your earth

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ellias Anderson Jr. 30 August 2012

Full of nice meaning that people should concern about them. we have to wake up from our dream and see the world, this poem is perfect. well done.

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Kelvin Owusu 30 August 2012

again good work love the meaning, there's nightmare in our reality, at times it seems beautiful only exist in broken wishes dream

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Sina Farajzadeh 30 August 2012

Sorry that I have to tell your mistakes. Take it as a friend's help. Full of women who have lost... Now, my idea. Nader, this poem is fantastic. Very great. The same way that I think. Great.

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A Dark Lifetime . 05 December 2012

I love it. So much for the worlds lost innocence. Why do we do this? Why do we pretend? I find this poem very breathtaking and I understand that feeling, those thoughts. // Love J.J

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Hugh Fraser 06 September 2012

Wow, dark but good. The final verse in particular is very striking.

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Allemagne Roßmann 03 September 2012

Thats the reason mankind must start afresh in another plant somehow Mars Thought provoking write.

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Hamid Negah 02 September 2012

Dear Nader, first of all I would like to apologize to say that is not correct to say the world is full of....The ratio should be considered...Indeed, the more we love, the more will see the beauty... God loves his creatures and we should too.

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Sina Farajzadeh 30 August 2012

Sorry that I have to tell your mistakes. Take it as a friend's help. Full of women who have lost... Now, my idea. Nader, this poem is fantastic. Very great. The same way that I think. Great.

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