God Is Poem by Ryan Brodesser

God Is



God is creature, a force?

One that can bend one than can coerce

His wrath bends and breaks all who stand in his way

But his love is eternal, to all of those who believe and pray

God is a guardian, who watches our race cradle to grave

And like a father in a fire, tries to save all his children he can save

God is a stern father who punishes his children who speaks lies

Justly gives what deserves, refusing to bend to tears or or cries,


But he is a lover, of all his children, refusing to let us come to harm

A friend, family who keeps us close in arms

We may change we live in His house as guest but he'll

Always be our friend

And between the host of heaven and man, works together to find a way as a single mend

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I am an atheist but I am seeing Christianity though a Christians eyes to try to understand. Please R and R!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuy Amante 11 July 2014

refusing to let us come to harm... Hmmm? HOw many Christian get slaughtered a day in Africa and other parts of the world? A vengeful jealous God? What? WHAT? Characteristic of an all-loving God with a huge ego? What? If find the beliefs to be very odd, but there is room for them in my Universe! Nice way you wrote that

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