God! ! ! Are You There? Poem by Yasser Koor

God! ! ! Are You There?

Rating: 5.0


Hey lord
It isn't you don't hear
I wondered if are you here
‘Cuz I’m confused
I can’t be like statues
Is that your chose?
People are dying that is unfair

I know that we have to pray
But what we should to say
They have no gun
Under your burning sun
Please end your sorrow play

I hope you talk and rave
Let the sun illumine our cave
Please it is just one sea wave
It will send them to the grave

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
roushan banu 09 January 2009

yes.... i too have that doubt.. whether god is here are not....

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Anjali Sinha 09 January 2009

Hey Yasser, I ask the same question to him Are u there? (read this one of mine) good write -10 anjali

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Little Hatila ;) 09 January 2009

of course God is there, but he gave us brain to do our best and by our prayers he will do what we are asking and trying for...if we just wait, dream and pray this is something impossible to get what we want....10 Hataw

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Blue Eyes 10 January 2009

i think we all know that God is everywhere we go not nessasarily in his real presence there, but by his knowladge of everything.anyway, u as i think expressing certain anger coz of the unjust life and to each his own opinion.

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Kesav Easwaran 23 January 2009

good write, Yasser...touching and emotional...10

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sumaira .....ir 19 January 2009

Yes, dear God is every whr.. Nd He wit thm alwayz.. Very sentimental and emotional poem nicely writin...

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sara }i{ 12 January 2009

i hope so, andi t's really touching. but really dont worry cuz god is with them

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 12 January 2009

even death is more precious than contempt....

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 11 January 2009

Hi Yaseer, you don't have to worry so much.Crime doesn't pay! ! ! All great evil men of the past have paid for their crimes.Thank God.

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