Treasure Island

Asif Andalib

(27 November 1967 / Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh)

God and Prophet Muhammad


Alas! There’s no one better than God
And He is cruel somewhat
God feels lonely
Although He has so many friends
Because
God is one of a kind
Even angels are not like God
Angels have wings
But God’s body has no wing
And they are like a dot to God

God is unable to create His own spouse!
That’s why it’s so hard to turn His mood on
And make Him satisfied.

Although God’s got all the powers
That exist in reality
He hasn’t got all the powers
That can be found in imagination.

God is neither a male nor a female -
God’s got more similarity
With mothers than others!
God’s got more similarity
With girls than boys!

Notwithstanding
Prophet Muhammad is the best creation
Since God's body is more like a male
And the universe is like His Holy Sperm
And
The Lord of the worlds
Is romantic, affectionate and loving.

Submitted: Friday, September 26, 2008
Edited: Monday, June 27, 2011

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  • Wendy Thopliss (2/1/2011 10:21:00 AM)

    Thanks for the invite, Your view of God is not the same view i have but i found your poem very interesting. (Report) Reply

  • Cleon Barrett (2/24/2009 11:09:00 AM)

    When it comes to the discussion of God I believe we are all entitled to our own opinion. Many believers have their own interpetation about God...as myself I like to see God more as a spirit who is able to dwell with in us to do the right things rather than a person set out into man kind....thank you for writing this poem because I think it has really opened up the gap to what believers think. (Report) Reply

  • Ershad Mazumder (11/25/2008 9:34:00 PM)

    Man arafa nfsa faqad arafa rabba. If you know yourself, you know your lord.- Prophet Mohammad(S)
    Know thyself- Socretes.
    Humanbeing is the whole creation- Devilpoet (Report) Reply

  • Kite Remedy (11/8/2008 1:02:00 AM)

    That's a great way to picture what God might think, feel, hope, and other humanly expressions that she might also feel..
    Great poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Giansalvatore Pintus (10/30/2008 12:57:00 PM)

    I personally believe you poems are good and there is nothing unclear! I also personally believe everybody have the right to see things in their way. In the end most of us believe in something and religion it should take us all in one direction, and again in my point of view I don't see anything wrong in your poems. Just keep writing and express yourself but also it is good for you to get lots of review about your poems no matter negative or positive and you always will get comments as religion in our daily bread.

    take care (Report) Reply

  • Rosan Sadir (10/22/2008 1:13:00 PM)

    I found that very insightful on how you view god. The words balance the structure with such finesse, and i can say i sort of understand what you mean. I am not that clever but i can see that you have talent. Keep writing (Report) Reply

  • Modon Mohon (10/17/2008 8:49:00 AM)

    Hi Asif,
    I have gone through some of your poems. The abstractness of your poems has really stirred my heart & I really feel sorrow when such talents like you are exisiting in Bangladesh but world doesnt know them due to being poets of 3rd world countries.It would really be doing unjustice if I dont write these lines for you & for your poems.
    Shibly, Faridpur. (Report) Reply

  • Chrissie Scriven (10/11/2008 5:13:00 AM)

    Asif Andalib, i have read a majority of your poems and i find them very touching, you speak of fact and fiction in the same context that most people would snigger at. I cant honestly say that i am a ferm beleiver in god or in the comandments as such but what i can say is your poems opened my eye's and made me think wether there can be a sort of god but as a person. keep it up for you could help people beleive the same that i do now x (Report) Reply

  • Ingeborg Von Finsterwalde (10/10/2008 8:49:00 PM)

    Ansif, you have a wonderful way of explaining and writing about the most powerful force in the universe, God.
    There is only one God, the Creator of all living things. The way you want to serve and honor Him is up to every individual. In my opinion the best set of rules are the ' Ten Commandments '. If we lived by that set of rules the world would be such a better place. Keep spreading the word.

    Ingeborg (Report) Reply

  • Ray T the Poet ! (10/10/2008 4:03:00 PM)

    Very uplifting and motivating. Its nice to read something about God because not too many people are brave enough to take the chance. If that is the best way to express yourself, keep up the good work. (Report) Reply

  • Rayniece Clayborne (10/10/2008 10:24:00 AM)

    I must tell you. This is very enlightening.
    I enjoyed it so. I see, hear, and very well understand. You are indeed a visionary.
    Wow like the way you allow your third eye to see before writing.

    wonderfully written and thanks again for sharing this beatiful piece with me. (Report) Reply

  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (10/10/2008 5:08:00 AM)

    A new thouht to all theists. As i am more an athiest, i have not much to comment. You may read my ' the concept od soul' and other phylosophical poems since you are neithe fanatic nor conservative. (Report) Reply

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