God Poem by tanya gupta

God

Rating: 2.8


God is no one,
but a faith that makes you feel good.

God is no one,
but a power that makes you confident everytime.

God is no one,
but a friend who is always with you even after your death.

God is no one,
but a mirror which shows you what you are.

God is no one,
but a shadow in which you feels secure.

God is no one,
but a hand which always bless you.

God is no one,
but everything which surrounds you.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
dont give god a limit by giving him a stone structure, but feel like god is everywhere you go, in everything you do, in everything you feel, in everything you see, in everything you hears, in everything you smells, in everything you write, in everything you reads and even he is in you but the difference is that you can feel him only when and if you are a right person, with right morals and values and moreover doing good deeds...THANKYOU...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shraddha The Poetess 21 February 2014

nice poem with a beautiful thought tanya......... i also invite u to read mine specially my hindi ones if u can

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 28 February 2014

God is omnipotent.......Tanya.........He carries a circumference in which we all are a part.........your perception of God is well presented here......well done.....keep writing......thanks a lot

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Barnabas Michael 10 March 2014

I like to say poem is instinct in you, your express impress me to smile indelibrately...thats the message i like to here, God is beyond fathom we know just a brick of him and the rest to know when we pull out flesh and see beyond mortal seas....

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Subhakanta Sahu 26 March 2014

Hi Tanya, I like your many definations of God. Really God is invisible truth present around us. The poem is really beautifull one

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Yash Shinde 27 March 2014

true description of god, a beautiful wrk dear

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Dinesan Madathil 26 April 2014

From times immemorial the relationship between man and a hypothetical God has been an alluring theme for metaphysical and devout poets. Your poem is yet another tribute addition to the concept of the dubious concept.. Anyway youngsters cannot skip the theme as the concept of God withstands the test of time perhaps.. Some one feeling secure in the shadow of God is a strange idea. I think you meant to say about the mystery thereof. However, I feel budding poets like you may better write about man and man than about man and God as poetry has to be innovative for establishing your feelings from time to time..

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Ahatisham Alam 05 April 2014

quite new definitions of God. different from mythology. well expressed.

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Ruma Chaudhuri 03 April 2014

Nice feelings in a simple language. Very well said.

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Mike Barrett 01 April 2014

I concur with many of the ideas expressed here. Have you ever considered that, as Soul, you too are a spark of the divine? Good write.

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Mike Barrett 01 April 2014

Hi Tanta, a great write! Have you ever considered that the Soul which you are might in fact be nothing less than a unique spark of God, in and of itself? Many of my poems are of a spiritual nature. Cheers!

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