Pal Eternity

Rookie (21/1/91 / Mumbai)

Goa - Poem by Pal Eternity

I'm in this magnificent land of beaches,
Feeding my mind with a splendid,
Piece of peace,
Mixing chill and thrill,
High on life's smoothness,
Breeze flowing, Priceless! !
Breaking the boredoms bars,
Deep into mystery of stars,
Flickering flame and pondering on lifes game,
Having a grand gala time and typing a rhyme,
Smoking and drinking like a king.
The essence of indulgence,
Fun and break from the daily run.
Hoping several events,
Collecting in my mind crystal moments.


Comments about Goa by Pal Eternity

  • Rookie - 5 Points Mohammad Akmal Nazir (5/6/2011 8:43:00 PM)

    Nice poem. Very well conceived. Rich in imagery and style. Fine poetics. I rate it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 6, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 7, 2011


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